I've finished my first Heroes story. Thank you to everyone who has read and/or reviewed.
I tried to link the chapter parts in the fic enteries, but for some reason it didn't work.
Here are links to all the chapters
Chapter 1 - Part One: http://1bill-sookie.livejournal.com/3869.html
Chapter 2 - Part One: http://1bill-sookie.livejournal.com/4166.html#cutid1
Chapter 2 - Part Two : http://1bill-sookie.livejournal.com/4440.html#cutid1
Chapter 2 Part Three: http://1bill-sookie.livejournal.com/4820.html#cutid1
EXTRA: Here are images of my 3 OCs, Julia Petrelli and the Gray Children http://1bill-sookie.livejournal.com/4945.html#cutid1